A New Beginning - Mary Suzanne


This was so, so, soooo bad I couldn't even finish it. I was like reading a bad fanfiction. It lacked of everything. Was missing from a properly expression, a well built storyline, character development. Everything.

 

And the worst part is that it could have been a good one. The basic idea was really interesting, but I couldn't even get to the middle of the story and had to quit. I really wish it had been better.